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Jules's Loins

byHobbes Goblynn©
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by Anonymous

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by Maria239407/13/04

creepy form

creepy, yes I said it!! but I like creepy muwaaahaaa ;)

** but I will just be sure to never buy purple silk panties or white cotton socks, lol**

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by WickedEve07/13/04

well,

it did have a bdsm feel at first but the shattered dreams part was a bit of a downer and took away from the eroticism and gave it more of an unpleasant, disturbing, rape feel.
Still, it's well written.

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