All Comments on 'My Secret Lover Ch. 03'

by FairytaleBaby

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Cute and Upbeat

I liked this chapter, it felt a bit more of a connecting chapter than the previous two but I enjoyed the shopping and was glad to see that our protagonist managed to gain back some ground in regards to her parents. The changing room scene was a more traditional bdsm scene but I liked it enough and thought that it made sense that they'd be hypersexual after being away from each other for so long. Additionally the prose was lovely and flowed very well.

I'm curious where this is going to go and look forward to seeing the journey, will her parents cause more issues? will Derrik? what about her school? but through all the questions I feel like everything will turn out well and that's a big selling point. Sometimes it's nice to read something this sweet and upbeat :D

5/5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Made my pussy dripping wet

I had to go make myself

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Lovein it

This,as it has been with all of your stories has been a great read,can't wait to see where you take this

classysnobbbclassysnobbbalmost 7 years ago
LOVE IT!

Your work is outstanding. Please keep writing both stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Chapter 4 PLEASE!

I've been checking the site everyday , waiting for you to continue this story! It's my favorite , I fell in love, and now I'm so hooked. please give us another chapter! your writing is amazing.

FairytaleBabyFairytaleBabyalmost 7 years agoAuthor
To anonymous

I am happy to report chapter 4 is finally complete and has been submitted! :) You should see it post later this week. It takes a few days to be approved, but because you and everyone have been so patient I made chapter 4 an extra long read.

Thank you for your continued support and happy reading

StonerPicassoStonerPicassoover 6 years ago
You are absolutely brilliant

I absolutely love this story keep up the amazing work

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