All Comments on 'A Lesson on Drones Ch. 00: Prologue'

When I reached the end my first thought was WTF, but I then realised that this was a teaser with the potential of being a good story. Please keep the chapters coming thick and fast.

Not only is that boring but I would have the same regard for a drone as I would my toaster. Something to be ignored until I need it.

It's not bad. The exposition is clunky because it doesn't have any framework but it's short so it's bearable.

Using 'submittere' instead of something like obtempero makes it a little too obvious you just looked at Google Translate.

You also appear to try and justify this slave/master thing that is going on, you should probably be less concerned about how moral this appears and try to make that come from the actions of the characters.

Also, stop addressing the audience directly, it really breaks S.O.D.

won't tell you truth, but I will. This story is complete waste of time.

I've always loved the idea of being turned into a robot for sexual purposes but its hard to find that kind of stuff