great start for what looks like a keeper..more coming i hope. you are making a good slow entry to whatever comes next, which is very believable and is sure to make any sequel that much more fun.
love your story line and character development
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Anonymous05/30/08
Wet panties then?
This is a sexy, dirty story. I've just given you a five, so I expect there'll be a nice wet rush inside your panties now, won't there? I hope so anyway. Thanks for the dirty pleasure, dirty angel. You've got a lovely dirty mind. I love the idea of women watching each other masturbate, especially mother and daughter.
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More Please
Great story line, definitely needs more chapters.
Great
Wonderful story, deffinetly leading itself into a great follow which I hope is on the way
you have a delightfully dirty mind
great start for what looks like a keeper..more coming i hope. you are making a good slow entry to whatever comes next, which is very believable and is sure to make any sequel that much more fun.
love your story line and character development
Wet panties then?
This is a sexy, dirty story. I've just given you a five, so I expect there'll be a nice wet rush inside your panties now, won't there? I hope so anyway. Thanks for the dirty pleasure, dirty angel. You've got a lovely dirty mind. I love the idea of women watching each other masturbate, especially mother and daughter.
Well Done
Excellent writing and very hot, I can't wait to read the rest of the series!
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