the teasing and build-up lead to one of the hottest daddy-daughter stories at literotica. very well done, both in dilaogue, action and sensuality. five melting stars.
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Anonymous07/21/04
Great story, but.............
'It was a dark and stormy night'? Please tell me you used that opening as a joke. Other than that, awesome story.
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Anonymous07/21/04
Fantastic
Excellant
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Anonymous07/21/04
BEST STORY ON THE WHOLE DAMN SITE
best part was on the couch! keep it from mom... its far more hot that way.
That was a very hot story. I would like to read more of these two sneaking around right under the old dried up lushs nose. And maybe the daughter kicking her mothers ass and becoming a full time slut for her father.
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Anonymous07/26/04
Well...
Haven't ever showed an interest in Incest stories till yours...you converted me, and I just can't stop....;)
English
wow
Extraordinary. This has to be one of the hottest stories I've read in a long while.
excellent
Realistic scenario, developed characters, excellent descriptions. All in all, an excellent story.
A hot story
Very good story. Wondering how theyll play out the distance when she returns to school. Jim might be making long weekend trips.
great story
nice story, very hot, how about a part 2
incredibly, wickedly hot
the teasing and build-up lead to one of the hottest daddy-daughter stories at literotica. very well done, both in dilaogue, action and sensuality. five melting stars.
Great story, but.............
'It was a dark and stormy night'? Please tell me you used that opening as a joke. Other than that, awesome story.
Fantastic
Excellant
BEST STORY ON THE WHOLE DAMN SITE
best part was on the couch! keep it from mom... its far more hot that way.
excellent
absolutely brilliant story, more pls pls.
Great Story
That was a very hot story. I would like to read more of these two sneaking around right under the old dried up lushs nose. And maybe the daughter kicking her mothers ass and becoming a full time slut for her father.
Well...
Haven't ever showed an interest in Incest stories till yours...you converted me, and I just can't stop....;)
A slut is as a slut does
Another bell ringer! My, my, such a dirty little slut for dear old dad. 'aren't you ashamed?' she asked him...NAH!
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