by Harddaysknight
Yeah this chapter is better than the last one was by miles
Great work
I hope we get to read the next chapter soon
My only complaint is too long between chapters!!!! Thank you for you work. I really appreciate it!!!
Thankyou for another great chapter. Very easily worth 5 stars.
HDK, "y u do dis" is a popular meme. I will now reiterate this, HDK man y u do dis?
Everything hit me in the feels. I will sound like an ultimate fanboy but I need more.
I first read your storytelling since 2011, every time it goes above and beyond that of normal stories. I am a massive fan, through thick and thin. Thank you for writing such a splendid series. I am looking forward for more chapters in the future
Wow!! Just amazing...Thank you once again for a beautiful story and...making me cry!!
It was more than what I had expected. You're worth the wait, but more soon
You Are killing me! I check every day. Great escape from reality reading. Thank you
Thank you! Like all the others, I check daily for this saga to continue.
Again a great chapter. I, as many of your fans do, wish these chapters came quickly. I also realize that pesky little things like jobs, family, life, get in the way. I want to thank you for the time you can squeeze in to write your stories. I try to be patient. Doesn't always work. Thanks Again
HDK. Your stories always have me reading with baited breath and your Lady in Red series is no exception to this rule. I feel that we do not see as much of your talents as we should so. I am asking you to try and submit a few more with a shorter time-span between them. Forget those anons who always seem to make stupid remarks that just means they cant write at all let alone to your standard. Another 5+ for this story. Iceman
Thanks HDK for taking the huge amount of time required to keep this sensational story going.
Love your work...especially given you post for free here on Lit!
As always, can't wait for the next installment.
Thank you!
C
Always entertaining...a continuing story that is still fresh...a "hook set" for the next one...I still can't get enough! A longer chapter...more often...maybe wishful thinking, but I will take what I can get and say THANKS HDK!!!!!!!!
Just love your work, like everyone else I can't wait for the next one. I reread some also reread your In my life series loved that one too so wish you added chapters to that as well. Buy like all the other I'll take what I get. Your writing frees my mind and I can relax thank you another great chapter
I'd foolishly feared you were running out of ideas, instead you've come roaring back with arguably your best ever chapter. New characters, incredible new adventures and a continuing critique of a government who have long forgotten that they serve at the pleasure of those who elect them. The characters are so vivid and appealing that we readers can't help but be invested in their activities.
Thanks so much for your story.
I can only give you 5 stars when this chapter, like the whole series, deserves at least 10 STARS. Like the child in the Dickens story said "Please sir, can we have some more". The story keeps getting better with each chapter...
Please don't make us wait very long for the 'rest of the story'.. This story is wonderful and well put together.
I've read this series twice and only found Part 3 on third time thru, THANX!
HDK,
You are the best not to mention clever.
Thanks
Your story, your ability to tell a story, your creativeness is inspiration!
Since 3/13 you have submitted 60 yes 60 chapters of an amazing series in 50 months. Thank you so much! Corvette John in Rainy Seattle
If you arn,t a professional writer, you should be. tremendous story my 4th time will be more times. contact baen books. I don't know what they would want altered. but it wouldn't be enough to spoil the storyAE5E
next weekend. It is being edited and I'll post it as soon as it comes back and I make the many needed corrections. Thanks for your patience.
A fabulous fantasy one could wish was real...a toast to a terrific tale...so very well done!
Your characters' physical and emotional descriptions were both accurate and consistent. The writing was very professional. I hope you do this for a living.
Great story and a great read hope you keep it going till the end all 5's so far
There did Caroline suddenly appear from.?She wasn't in the party up to the Hungarian visit!.Also a seven year old Hungarian girl speaking fluent English,get real.
It was said that Gwen's family it was with her, that should include her grandmother Caroline too. And regarding a seven years old Hungarian girl speaking fluent English, kids can learn faster than an adult . it isn't unuasual that a child in Europe speaks two or three languages at the age of seven. In Europe the foreign languages are started to be learned even from Kindergarten.
More hogwash,Jason has just receiving news of an earthquake,and Lady in Red assistance is already on the way.Did they know about the earthquake before it happened?.get real
Why the need to go on Facebook and Twitter,what happened to the lady in red magazine?.