Ordinarily don't like the use of condoms in fantasy but this worked well. His domination was hot. Power and the ass.
esl
by
Anonymous07/21/04
turgidly terrific
great stroker
by
07/21/04
Sorry, Box
I don't particularly dig "pretty-but-not-so-bright chick" stories (and yes: that's about as far as I went).
I'm sure (male) chauvinists and women who hate pretty chicks will enjoy reading your fine writing.
by
Anonymous07/22/04
b r i l l
hi its gamewinter
a peice of artwork
a good all round story, not to long or short,
bloody brilliant
by
Anonymous08/16/04
Good, But Could Be Better
I did enjoy this story. I enjoy all the stories about anal, mostly, but there was some redundance. It got kind of slow reading that her "pussy was fucking into the air" about 6 times within one scene. Try experimenting with new phrases to say the same thing. Other than that, great job. It wasn't short, but it wasn't so long I lost interest either. Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous12/26/05
great
Love your story keep writting them
by
Anonymous06/03/06
Mmmmmmmm
I think in stories and fantasies, people can think whatever they want - especially if it turns them on. There's no need to be politically correct.
I loved it, it's erotic and a turn on...Boxlicker's style is very much aimed at women I think, they know how heavenly what he describes feels.
NEw York{TOWN} minute Juxtaposed to California houre Juxtaposed to Brando+ depp Fijian zemeckis style Weekly ou monthly journaling transitioning journey to penultimate....&]{(; @D)DO)} &&&
Via Con DIOS Tu et Tu Familias {via spiritual emotional....Motion picture{s}
'Mi Familia'....Sayles, john 'Lone Star....Limbo....
by
Anonymous03/15/10
hot story
I enjoyed masturbating to your story.
by
Anonymous03/04/11
very hot
I am a mature woman who just read your story at the request of my husband. I was also a "special employee", more than once. First time was just my boss telling me to wear stockings and garter belt and no panties to work so he could stroke my thighs while I stood by his desk. A few years later, my boss took me to his bed while his wife was out of town...hot hot hot. I was not into anal at the time (am now...hehe)...enjoyed!.......Lin
English
yummy
cock stroking good
Good job!
Ordinarily don't like the use of condoms in fantasy but this worked well. His domination was hot. Power and the ass.
esl
turgidly terrific
great stroker
Sorry, Box
I don't particularly dig "pretty-but-not-so-bright chick" stories (and yes: that's about as far as I went).
I'm sure (male) chauvinists and women who hate pretty chicks will enjoy reading your fine writing.
b r i l l
hi its gamewinter
a peice of artwork
a good all round story, not to long or short,
bloody brilliant
Good, But Could Be Better
I did enjoy this story. I enjoy all the stories about anal, mostly, but there was some redundance. It got kind of slow reading that her "pussy was fucking into the air" about 6 times within one scene. Try experimenting with new phrases to say the same thing. Other than that, great job. It wasn't short, but it wasn't so long I lost interest either. Keep up the good work.
great
Love your story keep writting them
Mmmmmmmm
I think in stories and fantasies, people can think whatever they want - especially if it turns them on. There's no need to be politically correct.
I loved it, it's erotic and a turn on...Boxlicker's style is very much aimed at women I think, they know how heavenly what he describes feels.
pleasing
everyone seemed to be cum pletely satisfied.
NEw York{TOWN} minute Juxtaposed to California houre Juxtaposed to Brando+ depp Fijian zemeckis style Weekly ou monthly journaling transitioning journey to penultimate....&]{(; @D)DO)} &&&
Via Con DIOS Tu et Tu Familias {via spiritual emotional....Motion picture{s}
'Mi Familia'....Sayles, john 'Lone Star....Limbo....
hot story
I enjoyed masturbating to your story.
very hot
I am a mature woman who just read your story at the request of my husband. I was also a "special employee", more than once. First time was just my boss telling me to wear stockings and garter belt and no panties to work so he could stroke my thighs while I stood by his desk. A few years later, my boss took me to his bed while his wife was out of town...hot hot hot. I was not into anal at the time (am now...hehe)...enjoyed!.......Lin
fun
exciting reading
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