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a poetic rant
My children are selling magazine subscriptions for school. Would auntie jean please buy one? :)
your smoothie of the month
delivered in time for lunch
fat-free yogurt with
~sprinkles and nuts~
your uber-caff duel expressed
cinnamon, whipped cream latte
or whatever-
Hey, that sounds good to me! lol
Amen
love this
~commercialize this, you media freaks
with your demographic, nearly spastic
pilot of a new show screenplay
and don't you dare
attempt to sell me
change me
dress me
feed me
destroy my mind with your greed~
Great internal rhymes and rhythms
You're a fireball!
Excellent piece, someone had to say it, glad it was you
: )
A fine...
...free-ramble, and much different, it seems to me, than your other work. Loved running along with this!
Eu's Take
You are ALL killing me. This day should be marked down in everyone's calendars as the day the poetry flew high and free. Jeeeeeeezus, Jean. I read this aloud and wanted to frickin' read it again and again because it was so right coming out of my mouth. What an amazing job you did with this poem. It has a hip rhythm I adore and is impeccable. Don't change it, pleaaaaaase.
perkspective
it flows, it says something, it's got the right proper amount of length of poetry skills, internal structure. It rocks...
and I have to say, I've been saying that a lot today, which scares me. I'm about to go see if someone put some X in my diet coke. *looks around all paranoid like*
this style.....
......looks very familiar to me. it looks like someone is taking a stand. the ending is super. you couldn't have said it any better than that. nice read.
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