All Comments on 'Alejo'

soft and gentle like a lullaby.

i enjoyed this!

cheers!

so beautiful..

If they ever fix the edit feature i would add this as a favorite.

Such a contrast between the minimal words and the incredible feelings they stir.

Really a masterpiece

Thank you

Randi, I enjoy your spacing and your word choices. Your poetry is rather new to me so I will be watching out for you ;)

this is my favorite part-

cradle that weary head

slumbered scarred

upon my breath held

careful bosom bed

Very good minimalism.

Your word choices were exquisite. Such stark and clear images. Lovely rendering.