Very well done but the ending was poor. Drifting off to sleep? There were three other people in the room hot to trot, and Frank should have gotten some action with grandma.
Terrific!!!!!
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Poor ending
Very well done but the ending was poor. Drifting off to sleep? There were three other people in the room hot to trot, and Frank should have gotten some action with grandma.
Yummy!
Terrific!!!!!
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