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by Tathagata07/15/04

you can read

so many things into this.
I like it alot
Thank you

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by WickedEve07/15/04

I like it

but not sure it qualifies as senryu. Senryu is more about human foibles, human nature. Check out the other senryu that's also new today. That may be more along the lines of senryu.
Either way, still an interesting read.

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