A Late Night Surprise

TTerrific story

Very hot, wish I could give more than 5 stars.

Beautiful

Great story. I think we should get together. Check your mail for contact info.(begood41)

A great first offering

A great first offering. Can't wait for you next story, I am sure that you will develop your plot more fully and why don't you shock mama in some way, she needs a wake up call.

More please

Hope to hear more of that story

Hot story sparkle!

and I love the last line.

Very nice

Nice content. Overall great first time story.

It was aight

Nice story, i liked it alot, however it would have been better with more dirty talk. thankzzzzz.....nice for ur first attempt tho.

A 33 year old balding fat guy loved it!!!

I loved this story, it made me want to cum hard!!!! Mabe we should talk talk to each other about role playing. Drop me a line.mwclarksr@literotica.org

Interesting Alternative

Wonderful story line - interesting twist at the end and a great job on your first effort. Looking forward to reading more from the sparklegirl1990.

Mother's Helper

Wonderful story line - and nice surprise ending. A first publishing effort that shows good pronise for the author; some gramatical improvements would make it better. That said, this old man foung the theme very hard-ening! Let's have some more. GP

Delighting Daddy

For a first time author , you have hit the jackpot ,it was terrific, well paced,content was just about right, only one query , on the cervix entry ,you mentioned no pain or discomfort only pleasure, no back aches etc. disregarding that, it was a very beautiful story very believable, what a surprise ending, selfish bitch of a mother. Just about the price of the mother if the father and daughter set up as a couple and started breeding like pair of rabbits, they are certainly fucking like a pair.
Good luck sparklegirl.
Regards Jem.

That's this Daddy's fantasy!

Fantastic! Spanking a bad girl's naughty ass, whipping her clit to make her cum, sucking her pussy while she sucked my cock.......what could make life any better?
Thanks for the inspirations for a great dream tonight!
Rick

Hot!

Can't wait for the sequel and it would be great if Daddy knocked his little girl up!

Actually would have been a lot better if it was --

believable. Does anyone actually believe that a mon would come all over his sleeping daughter than leave the room?

Does anyone acturlly believe that a teen age girl would actually desire middle age men and have had several lick her pussy?

Creative!

A wonderful first submission. Creative-erotic- passionate- AND with a beautiful, pixie like face to make it even more arousing to imagine! Keep up the efforts!

Creative!

A wonderful first submission. Creative-erotic- passionate- AND with a beautiful, pixie like face to make it even more arousing to imagine! Keep up the efforts!

Enjoyed that

Oh wow that was good. I was 14 when my dad started teaching me how to give blowjobs, and was 14 the first time he fucked me. I just love family sex.

I want to eat my adult step daughters pussy.

She won't let me do anything with her. Can some one tell me how to get closer to her in the physical sense. She loves me as a daughter loves a father, but I love her as a man loves a woman. I would be so very happy to have sex without penetration with her. She doesn't have to reciprocate. I just want to please her because I love her so very much. I have tried love spells on her with three different spellcasters and
no one can get through to her for me.

i want this too

Im 24,dads 46,and i want this too. Teased, seduced since i was ssshhhhh, and he hasn't still taken me like in your story. I want him so bad i ache. Im stacy18bi@hotmail.com

Great story!

I can't believe you haven't written more. I just found your story today 10/29/2014.

thats very hott story, i have a step daughter i would love to eat her pussy and cum in her womb

willing to spread my legs

want to volunteer for daddy to fuck me- a hard cock deep into my cervix oh yeah daddy - fuck me daddy!