by Liar
Delicious! From beercans and stoli shots all the way down the center of this poem, I could feel it, taste it, hear it...*sigh* Great stuff. Two for two so far in my book.
Even if I hated poker, I'd want to play with you. My gawd, Man, you were on fire with your poetry today. I'm am impressed and slightly discomfited knowing I will be up against you on Wednesday. Hopefully, being up against you, will flush out some of its own rewards. *smirk*
Delightful, delicious leaves me wanting to play a few hands myself. Are you a betting man?
....strong, Liar, very typical of the power and presence of your recent poetry! Much better, in my opinion, than your second offering today.
yes, very strong, powerful and imaginativly enigmatic. I adore your poetry liar, have you thought of submitting to any contests? I have some links if you want them, in fact, I think they are posted on a thread somewhere, i will check on that..good work, enjoyed this read very much :)