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by Selena_Kitt

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
this is better than I thought it would be

The title left me thinking it was going to be a poorly written "cum gulping" poem. But you did a good job with this. You offer the reader images. You keep it moving at a good pace. Very real and interesting.

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