All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 81'

If it isn't broken, don't fix it. I cannot conceive why these guys would want to do this? They already have all the benefits this silly ring would give them, just not all the commitments it could imply. Children are a huge issue, in that if you are parents of a child, you want to raise them not have someone else do it. There are too many problems with this to even mention in this paragraph. Steve Wallace has already written this story once in "The Circle" which had a concept of three guys and three girls that bought into with $ a co-op arrangement. "Billionaire, etc" is a polyamorus deal much like where he is heading with this story. I thought this one was the story of one guy and his "wives" although that turned out a little different than I expected. This is just a dumb idea that probably will have little impact on the story. The number of people in this story bog these kinds increasingly complex arrangements down as far as plausible credibility in concerned.

yep this was what i thought was going to happen after you had mark become some lame cuckold. only took you 60 so odd chapters to get there. the whole im ok raising everyone elses child is as retarded as it gets if adoption isnt involved. this quasi wanna be hippie free love commune shit really ruins any actual story youve attempt to come up with here.

this is a massive story, many plots, many characters.. and the new direction (plot) does seem to lend to the "hippie commune" future. not that the direction is bad, but certainly not what many of us expected? Billionaire poly-amorous hippie with unlimited discretionary funds... allows for unlimited story constructs, and some difficult to fathom situations

Please continue the story... i am very interested to see where we are headed... truth be known, once the Mark-Elsa pregnancy finally happened, i expected a few more, and wondered how you were going to keep Mark from being the next Father of the World..

good work and thanks

Steve, I've stayed with you for 81 chapters but you are reaching a place I just am

not comfortable in. Marks first wife is pregnant with his child and like it or not that changes everything here. He should have a real wedding for her to give his child

the Worthington name legitimately. He could still have the other sister wives around

but not feed the tabloids. Even if a few of the other couples marry for real its called

living an open lifestyle. Put Marks ring on the pinky finger of the married women who partake next to the real wedding ring. The Meadows is becoming a commune. Please don't go there

One more nitpick Steve, There are fifteen people in your main story but not one is of

color, man or woman. Don't you like minorities? Ill stick for a few more chapters just to see where you take this. Thanks, TigerT57

I've enjoyed this story but I think it's getting monotonous now. More and more people joining the group for wild sex. It's getting hard to track all the players and it seems to be getting repetitive.

Now that you are going headlong into the gay shit instead of skirting the edges