All Comments on 'Caffeinated Capabilities'

by Eumenides

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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
love this part

It kills me that for

Time that shall go uncounted

I sipped from cups of sweet tea

When I?m a sporadic coffee bean queen

Who rests her laurels on pads of paper

Wet with scrawls of ink

that last line especially just seems to define you at that moment. wonderful smooth read that is contemplative and determined. I enjoyed this very much :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
mm-mmm

There are so many good lines in this poem and some great alliteration. It reads well aloud and deserves several go-throughs. Good 'un Eummie!

:Note: I no longer use the thermometer.

perksperksover 19 years ago
perkspective

My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Go for that magical elixir and let someone else drink the damn tea.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Go for that magical elixir and let someone else drink the damn tea.

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