All Comments on 'Accidental Summoning Ch. 01'

good!

As I said I will wait to see how you develop the story. Before I rate it and give you my opinion whether it is bad or good.

Is your song of ebony story concluded yet???

Oh, come on! Why do “key inflection points that help distinguish the Earth timelines” have to be from American history?! “In what year fell the Berlin wall, and was Mobutu still alive?” or something about the Black Plague would have been so much less cliché…

Other than that, the story is interesting, albeit slightly disturbing.

Well written

As to the key infection questions we all know those in the USA know nothing outside their own history or Geography😎

"Right in the middle of it all, he had the random thought that his neighbors were certainly going to be complaining about the noise."

Makes the story. A wonderful read.

Not what I expected, now comes the conflict part of the story, seeing the introduction part is, what a turn around this is going to be you think it's going to be loving but nope yank that rug out from us gee thanks😉