There were a couple of spelling errors, but they did not detract from the overall story. I liked the slow build-up to the final act. But, best of all, I liked the story because it was a loving story of a man and wife. A couple who truly love each other and love to pleasure each other.
It is a breath of fresh air in the midst of the stench of cheating spouse stories that overwhelm this site.
Short but so sweet
Great story progessing slowly as I like. Hopping for more torture.....
Thanks.
Very erotic story
There were a couple of spelling errors, but they did not detract from the overall story. I liked the slow build-up to the final act. But, best of all, I liked the story because it was a loving story of a man and wife. A couple who truly love each other and love to pleasure each other.
It is a breath of fresh air in the midst of the stench of cheating spouse stories that overwhelm this site.
Thank you for your effort.
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