All Comments on 'An Unlikely Affair Ch. 01'

Very Nicely written Bengali Mother ( I really do hope that you aren't a male hiding behind a saree :-D )

I love the elements in your story - A Gorgeous Bengali Lady , Tall, Voluptuous,

Uninhibited, Older and a TEACHER . All my boxes ticked :-D

Your writing seems paced well and I love the ' desi ' details - that makes it seem more authentic.

Tighter editing would've made it much more enjoyable.

Please do continue this relationship and do keep writing :-)

excellent storie

please continue

Well written indeed. Keep up the good work....

But why is your first page identical to an earlier story submitted by your "editor"? Are you both the same person? As stated in an earlier comment, I hope you are not a man masquerading as a woman?

Hello,

You made a valid point and I thought I should clarify that.

Prabhat helped me to edit my story and although at one point we did talk about publishing some storied jointly, I don't know why he decided to publish my story.

I certainly wasn't aware that he was going to.

To his defence though, I had to hibernate for a period due to a personal emergency situation and was not online for a few months. And he published a part of the story while I was hibernating.

Hope this clarifies.

Thank you for a nice story , the major elements came together at the end with a few insights into the Indian culture which I appreciated. Well done , this story has lots going for it and can be developed further .

I love your style, looking forward to the next chapter!

Its been ages since we got to read such an exquisite erotica from somebody

Your flair for good writing is God gifted. Exceptionally brilliant build up and great attention to details

Rated this 5 star and sincerely hope to read plenty of great writing like this.

Only 2 points : Are we going to see more of Sagarika and Arindam ?Please say yes !

2ndly,make Sagarika a lot more 'open' now as the ice has broken. Please make her wear extremely low sarees showing her navel to her class with skimpy blouses and if possible some jewellery too !!

Kudos to you,keep writing

Lovely read, very nice, I went to a university where my professors wore stockings underneath their saree's which was a big big turn on. I hope you wear them too Sagarika during the lovely winter months of Calcutta in your next episode.

great work writing this story. took a decently slow pace but sex should have been more excitingly descriptive.

i appreciate your work but do not refrain from writing more and please... please think on sequels to this story.

writing this story, being a woman, is really fantastic... for we do not see much indian woman authors.

waiting your next episode

Please keep writing. I'm in love with you Sagarika!

Love from Nepal

when we get next updated ????

Love to read a sequel on Sagarika...make her wear lowest saree and skimpiest blouse now,and some feminine jewellery....to make her more alluring

rated 5 stars,waiting for an update

waiting for next part.....

Beautifully written, loved to read and feel it. U made me cum!

It was by far one of the best stories I have read. Please follow this up. Waiting for the next issue.

waiting

A really wonderful read after a long long time. Strikes the imagination pretty wildly. Loved it.

The story had such a smooth flow to it...even though you switched the narration between the two characters..it still had the flow...enjoyed it a lot...and the character background was deep and gripping..loved the story

A classy, voluptuous mature Indian woman with taste. Great story!

This is by far the best narrative writing i have read. You should be proud of it.

This is the kind of lust laden affair most young men, who crave after elder ladies dream often and mature females too.

I agree with adulatory comments here, because this is one of those erotic stories, we want to read again and again, makes us arouse so well.

This is the fifth time, I have read and like every time before, ended up masturbating, as if I am Arindan..

Absolutely great and so believing, as if happening to me or I am watching it...

Nose picking as insertion is highly erotic....

What an wonderful erotica. very subtle, yet very arousing..want morw from you

Very well written. Will we read more of Sagarika and Arindam's story?

Very nice

And ended up jerking off to a fantastic orgasmic explosion...waiting for the next chapter now and would keep reading again and again..

It is a amazing story.....please conclude the story......

Please continue

I have been coming to this page forever to see the next part...when will you ever write. I hate writers who write just one story..call it a chapter 1...and then leave it incomplete...I hope you won't do that.

Where is the next part publish it quickly

It have been truly inspired to write my own story after reading yours. Please continue writing, I've been waiting forever for a sequel or some other content from you.

More in my private message.

Great story,

If I am honest I would normally feel impatient with a long build up but the way you describe the beginnings of love and the perspective of both parties was original and very realistic. I led perfectly to the explosively erotic conclusion which turned me on so much. I also loved the way you use language. It is perfectly correct but has a hint of being ‘Indian’, an exotic mixture for this uk man!

Great romantic story by good, genuine people. Why no sequels?