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Last Call Of the Day Ch. 01-02

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by Anonymous

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by 07/22/04

Well. . .

I won't be checking your submmission page.

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by Anonymous07/23/04

I will

Promises to be a very good story. Nice, gramatically correct
prose with good spelling. Also developing crretly.
I like it.

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