All Comments on 'Agent Murphy and the Sexbot'

hot and interesting ,will there be more please!!!! .wish those upgrades were available to me ( mmm i can dream).loved the imagination .

I will probably write a sequel, although I'm not sure what to do with it yet.

Thanks for commenting :-)

you have a good start, keep it going

I'm just far too distracted by my sexbot to do any writing at the moment...

Always a fan of futa transformations. I like the reluctant/repulsed take on the changes.

I love futa & transformation stories. Making the MC ace was a fun challenge, but it also makes it difficult to write sequels.

I like this. I could follow this story if you make more, and not just for the sex. This is actual sci fi, and well written too.

Hi GeneraZ - thanks for the encouragement!

I do enjoy writing sci-fi, and had great fun with this.

That's a lot of content for such a brief story. I was almost turned off by the present tense over-usage, but the material was very good. I'll gladly give your other works a read. Good work and thank you!

There's nothing wrong with present tense, though it is over-used by people who think it's easy when it isn't.

I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting!

AlinaX, You are my new superhero. I love this story, the detaul, how easilly I was immersed into the universe you created. You're gifted eith the abity to create really multidimensional characters with depth & realism. Yor writing is sophisticated & enhrossing.

I hope this story continues into a series.

5 stars, my thanks & gratitude.

Hi CliterateDyke - Thanks for all the likes, and this lovely comment.

I'd like to continue this story, but haven't worked out how (yet - I often think about it). Writing erotica with an asexual protagonist is tricky.

You are a very inventive writer. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

I enjoy the possibilities that erotica provides.

This was a great story. I just wish she did more to the DR once she had her tied up.

I did consider it, but there wasn't really a good motive for it.

Thanks for reading - and thanks for the comments!

How about a part 2?

I'd like to, and often think about it, but the character's asexuality makes it difficult.

Great story! Hot and with creative sci-fi elements. I too would very much enjoy a sequel. How about Al reacting to Murphy's very submissive subconscious desires? Or "therapy" sessions to make her turn bi/hetero/something-sexual? (I'm aware that's not how sexuality works, but I believe it would make for a good story nonetheless.)

I can't change her orientation, but there are certainly possibilities. What I'm struggling with is the story-sequel side. There needs to be some mission for Agent Murphy that lets her make use of her new abilities - and somehow have a lot of sex too.

But thanks for the praise & encouragement! :-)

I just sent you a message with ideas for a sequel. I hope to see some more from Agent Murphy.

Cheers

I haven't received it - but I'll look out for it. Thanks, however.

I see this is about 4 years old but I just came across it and it was a great find. You really know how to write some damn fine tales. I would normally think that most are too short but since I totally lack the creativity and ability to author anything, who am I to complain. I am just happy to find gems like this and be able to enjoy them thanks to authors like you so aside from the 5 star vote, Thank you very much for your work creating these stories and posting them.

J.D.

Glad you liked it. Never could work out how to develop this one, but some of the research I did was picked up later for my Ship's Whore series.

Now THIS is science fiction. Kudos.

I really enjoyed this.

The concept was imaginative and the end result was incredibly hot. It’s always interesting to me when authors submit work in terms of the balance between the story and the eroticism. What I appreciated about this was that you never diminished or relegated the heat to the background, and it complimented the story as a result.

Your writing style is a joy and it makes it so much easier to devour your work in a single sitting. I’d say this is one of the best short stories I’ve read here.

82/100. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

This story does manage to draw on both my erotica kinks and my sci-fi nerdery... :-)