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jackbxxxxjackbxxxxover 19 years ago
Yes, Yes, I surrender!

Great story! You had me hard and ready to shoot with Capt. Knight. I can't wait to read Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
"boobies"

I stopped reading the moment I read "a woman with her boobies..." Make your characters believable or at least make them not sound like 12 year olds.

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