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by jackbxxxx07/24/04

Yes, Yes, I surrender!

Great story! You had me hard and ready to shoot with Capt. Knight. I can't wait to read Chapter 2.

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by Anonymous11/08/09

"boobies"

I stopped reading the moment I read "a woman with her boobies..." Make your characters believable or at least make them not sound like 12 year olds.

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