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by perks07/18/04

perkspective

My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.

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by lostandfounder07/30/04

Sensual...

and sexual. You used a often used theme and wrote a very good poem without being cliche. A hard thing to do. Nice work!

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