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Rocks, Splash of Water

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by Anonymous

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by tungtied2u07/18/04

Left me warm

on the inside. Really evoked the chill of fall. Thanks.

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by Tathagata07/18/04

Must

have been a good scotch.
Excellent wording.
I can taste it and smell it

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by tarablackwood2207/18/04

A new poet...

...and the words that are here rock! The images and phrasing show power and great promise of a strong new voice.

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by fawnie07/18/04

i hate scotch..

and i hate the chill of winter.
i liked the poem though! lol

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