by Psychocandy
I love you and this story! Thanks for the update! I can't wait for more 💕
Seriously this is one of the best stories on here. I love how there's an actual plot and development of characters. And while I LOVED reading from James POV I do wish we knew a little more about Tab's past if she has one. Still adore this story keep it up!
Loved it!! Five stars! Anxiously anticipating what happens next. Also I love how you're not afraid to change pov! Keep up the fantastic work!!
You're the queen of pace, characters, atmosphere and just great creepy storytelling! I love this story so much I look forward to it all the time! Thanks for sharing x
I love you guys. And I'd love to tell you more about Tabitha! I'll be sure to in the next chapter. Expect it in a couple weeks or so <3
This story is amazing! I love it so far. I hope it stays deliciously intoxicating!
because it was so exciting to get so much understanding at once. Now I'm back to that cliffhanger and anticipation life.
Looking forward to more.
What a fantastic story. I just binge-read all of it today. Love the slow buildup of the last few chapters. I will be looking forward to more!
The story is fantastic! Aside from a very few characters, it's difficult to tell the "good guys" from the "bad guys", because even the worst shown so far seem to think they're acting for some nobler cause (except for Hala).
I especially like the little bits of absolute authenticity that shows how much the author is familiar with the city the story is set in. To wit...unless you actually live in a city that still has home milk delivery and are up between midnight and 6:30am, you really wouldn't know how fast a Milkman moves. Denver still has home delivery and Milkmen, who often make in excess of 200 hundred deliveries a night have to average 90 seconds per home including drive time, so to quote James, "they move". It's also a bit of trivia only someone very familiar with the city would know. It makes me love this already fantastic tale that much more.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Psychocandy where are you! I love this story and all of the things you've written! Your style is amazing :D please write more I miss the story x
I haven't read your other works (yet!), but your talent as a writer is quite impressive.
please don't give up on this incredible story! you're a very talented writer! I hope all is well with you, best wishes 💞
Back for my... hmm, third... fourth read-thru, assembling the clues as to who's who and what's what and who's what.
I'm rarely envious of another author's skill, but this story is one of only a handful that makes me say "Damn, I wish I had written that!"
Like everyone else I'm hoping all is well and we'll see a continuation of this wonderful tale.
I'm in love with this story! The characters are all wonderfully I'm so hooked please keep going with it 😁
Please come back! So many people love your writing and really miss you :(
You are seriously one of my favorite authors, not just of erotica but in general; I come back and reread your stuff all the time. I loved Treasure, and I love the character dynamics you develop. Waiting for updates on this, I started to read your shorts and fell in love with those too. I really hope you continue this series, but I'm biased. I wanna know how it ends! Or how you intended it to anyways- but that's not why I'm writing this. I hope even if you don't finish this series, or continue to post any stories here, that you know you have an incredible gift in writing, and that you keep writing. I may be selfish, you undoubtedly have a life and obligations of your own, but...I hope if not here, I can read something some other day and hope that the author is you, continuing to share your gift with the world.