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You are forgiven my son, say 20 hail Mary's and just don't let a delay

like this happen again. Just kidding, I know writers like you have real lives and sometimes life throws you a change-up instead of a fast ball. I am just glad that even with life's problems you felt compled to finish the story. You are in the 10-15% of writers who do finish their stories. You have no idea how frustrating it is for a reader to start an excellent story only to have the writer stove you under the bus by not finishing the story. I have given you 5-STARS for each chapter. Retired Army NCO P.S. I hope things are working out for you and life is better for you.

Well paced, well written, and part of the larger story in a way that makes me want to read the next. Also, awesome way to bring back Mike. Don’t rush the next chapter. I'll wait.