All Comments on 'Magical Mischief Whore Pt. 01'

I found your story to be very fascinating. Your description of things was in depth and new. I am looking forward to the rest of your story. I am wondering what other descriptions you have of people, objects, social intercourse, and yes of course sex.

Please keep going

But to short

Interesting start, I can understand stories written with chapters, but prefer stories if each chapter could be read as a single story. I don't usually write to be critical, prefer sharing positive thoughts, you do write well, however on this occasion you have introduduced two characters. Then stopped. I'm feeling underwhelmed.

"I can understand stories written with chapters, but prefer stories if each chapter could be read as a single story."

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You don't understand stories written as chapters because that makes absolutely no sense at all. A chapter is one segment of the complete story, NOT a separate story in and of itself.