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All Comments on 'Neighbor Girl Needs Help Pt. 03'

by badguyloki

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Too short

Needs another 1000 words.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Stop

Volume 1 and 2 worked but the 3rd try does not cut it.

badguylokibadguylokialmost 7 years agoAuthor
can't win them all

Yeah, I know this wasn't great. I wrote half of it a few months ago and forgot about it. I picked it back up a couple weeks ago and tried to finish it. I will do better. The next one will be longer as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs finishing. Looking forward to reading it then.

Looking forward to reading it then.

Primate_HousePrimate_Houseover 6 years ago
Part 4?

Seriously, please write more of this. You can't leave the story hanging here.

General_OGeneral_Oalmost 6 years ago
More

This is a good storynbuts it’s been left hanging it’s nneds another chapter of 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Chapter 4 and more, please.

Quick read that is entertaining. Would like to see where it progress and with whom. :)

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