All Comments on 'Crossing a Line'

by LiveCat

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing

That was amazing! Got me real hot very quickly. Wish there was more

MoondogAUMoondogAUabout 7 years ago
Great to see you back Cat, nice story.

Thanks for a nice new story, in your usual gentle and warm style. Great to read another of your stories! All the best and inspiration in your writings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Mmm great story. Friendship turning into love are my favorites. Very hot very sexy.

MaonaighMaonaighabout 7 years ago
Welcome home

Welcome home, Cat. This was a nice little tale to herald your return, not quite to the standard of '...Country Vet' but enjoyable nonetheless. But please, Cat, don't use multiple exclamation marks---that's a sign of a rank beginner and you are a very long way from being that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Was over the moon to see a new story from you, just waiting to be read.

Many thanks for a brilliant story which i thoroughly enjoyed!!

sandiebiFsandiebiFabout 7 years ago
very lovely!

What a treat to read such a romantic and sexy story. I hope someday it will be my reality. I loved it!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 7 years ago

I quite enjoyed this "falling in love" tale. It spoke to my soul.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
My heart is still palpitating

Simply beautiful. So very real, winsome, and awkward in all the best ways. The love radiate through. Nothing crass or phony. No shallow sex. The flow and tone and emotional unfolding were all electric. Loved it, loved it, loved it. In my all-time Literotica top 10. Got me so wet several times.

xoxo,

Di

TSreaderTSreaderabout 7 years ago
A very yummy story!

Very yummy indeed! Well done! Thank you!

DeannaTDeannaTalmost 7 years ago
Love and passion!

What a wonderful story and so well written! It brought back so many amazing memories of my first sapphic love!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Lovely!

Well written and I could definitely feel their energy.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 7 years ago
Very good story!

I love a good romance, and this one is that, and more. Thank you for sharing it with us!

moraymanmoraymanalmost 7 years ago

Really enjoyed this story. A nice romance story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Thanks Cat

Never enough love and romance...and oddly there's a lot of hatred in the romance sector on this site often....So glad that you balance things out..and do it brilliantly...Sorry that I comment anonymously but I don't write , so don't really contribute...

Gay_Love_LoverGay_Love_Loveralmost 7 years ago

Yep, some romance makes a naughty story even better.

Aerial0493Aerial0493over 6 years ago
more please!!!

Fantastic , we love your stories and it seems a bit like an education for us with lots of things to try xxxxxxxx

CochettaHDCochettaHDover 6 years ago
Loved it

Loved the way they came together. Was a good story. Sad it had to end

stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
much more please

2 best friends getting together and finding love , what could be better

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
BEAUTIFULLLL

oh gooood i love this sooo much!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Leave us wanting more?

Would love to read more from you...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love Story

I loved your story of two women deeply in and showing and continually expressing their love for each other. For my taste, there are way too many sex slave/domination type bullshit stories on this site. It may just me, but I don't understand how degrading, humiliating, hurting others and often destroying everything in their "lover's" life can possibly be an expression of love and caring.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 6 years ago

I love reading friendship turning into love stories. This one was a very nice read.

maribel_fmaribel_fover 4 years ago
Sweet!

I love stories like this - friends becoming lovers - and you tell this one wonderfully!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
That was an amazing story

It was so real and I could feel the awkward exchange of emotions between the characters before their confession and the cringy moments after.

TheserialwaffleTheserialwaffleover 3 years ago

Beautiful happy story. We need happy stories in our lives now and always but in these times of solitude and pain we need more of them. Thank you

Themaster20021Themaster20021over 2 years ago

No further mention of there being two houses at their disposal….maybe there is another story somewhere?

Loved this!

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 2 years ago

A very sweet story; one of your best. Suppose that if you have to go out on a high note (not that your fans wanted that), not a bad way to call it a day :-(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Way hotter than any sapphic video out there!

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

I often wonder what things happen in the life of a writer to precipitate their stories, especially after a long absence.

Whatever it was, Cat, I'm happy for you (and us, now that you've returned).

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

A very human enjoyable story.

AquariusgirlAquariusgirlover 1 year ago

This is definitely one of my all time favourites on here. I just didn't want it to end!

Definitely 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai643about 1 year ago

Yet another good story!

Thank you!

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