All Comments on 'Jessica Pleasures Herself'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very poor grammar and typos

The grammar and typos are so very bad in this. So bad in fact, that I stopped reading after a couple paragraphs.

Withdraw the story and at least proof read it and put it through a spell and grammar checker.

Really bad.

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