All Comments on 'A Fractured Reality'

I enjoyed this story, it had an interesting slant and whilst it was hot, I would have liked more details and more nasty sex.

It was well written and flowed easily.

I throughly enjoyed this story and really would love to read a part two, or three, or as many original ideas as you can produce

Don't tease me with this fire chapter make a part 2

Good to read something 'different' Thanks for posting it.

One of the most original stories I've read in a long time. This was a fascinating read into Charlie's psyche. I hope for a second part or epilogue to finish the story.

did he make a tulpa?

Your stories are so good ... and so frustrating. From a literary POV I think they mostly end right on time. Unfortunately, by the time they reach their HEA ending, I feel like I know the characters well enough to want to hear more about what they get up to.

Twilight Zone indeed.

Genuinely interesting, for smut at the very least. Well written enough for me to leave my first comment saying so after all these numerous years on the site! I like the black mirror/ twilight zone-esque ending.