All Comments on 'Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter Ch. 04'

YEEEAAAAHHHHHH!!

Would like to read more of this series. I hope that Cindy and Mr Matthews patch things up. I hope for more threesomes with both girls.

I hope we don't have to wait three years for the next installment :)

MORE!!!!!!

I "second" the wish that there's more chapters in this story that well see...hopefully, sooner than later.

Thanks.

Please continue writing. I loved it!

More with mom (Debbie)

I agree with the others please keep on writing!

Please more 😍😍

... much improved.

Having seen how you can perform with Kayla, her best friend, I reckon that Cindy will be working hard to make sure that she is the main player, even if she does have to 'share' with her chum. That will be on Cindy's terms tho'.

pls carry on...

More. Please, Mr. Mathews.

Nice story pls carry on

Please write more chapters <3

So looking forward to episode 5 !

Please don't leave it too long...........

Has been sitting idle for awhile. I sure hope he gets back to it. Theres Cindy to get on the Good side of Debbie still needs to be Done. then to Keep up with Cindy , Kayla & Debbie will be a Masterpiece. and Suppose the Ex comes back looking and finds him with three 2 much Younger and 1 her age.

Surely you won't leave the numerous readers who want to continue this story hanging? You need one more chapter at least to wrap it before the girls leave for college. Of then you could have one where they visit him over the summer break too.. Great story!

Superb story so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters. There's plenty of potential for a sexy threesome and the mother's obviously ready for some hot action too.

very odd ending. you must have run out of words,,well written, very hot, well paced,do not understand why you would leave off at this point. certainly much more that could be written here.

Enjoyed the story and how he did both girls. Waiting to see what will transpire with mom, it should be interesting as I don't think he has a conscience and will end up with the mother for a longer relationship.bb

Enjoyed the story...hope we don't have to wait years for the next chapter!

I hope you write again soon, this made me soooooo horny I wanna fuck some neighbor,haha, anyways, I'm truly am a fan, and your stories one of my fav, keep em coming please;), I hope you'll finish chapter 4 SOONEST!!!!:), more power!!!!

But surely it's time Debbie gets some attention

So good, maybe Mr. Matthews should become Cindy's sugar daddy and her classmates Gigolo. It was great, maybe have a reverse gangbang next?

great story yet again 2 18 year olds would be awesome, then there is Debbie ???

Holy hell that was hot, full points :)

Sure would like to read a story about hooking up with Cindy's mom, Debbie!

Good story too, please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter

Waitin for additional for story line. Sweet read!

Effen aye..hot hot..oh my hot!!

Doesn't he get to fuck Cindy's mom?

Looking forward to part 5! Wherein, with any luck at all, he fucks all theses ladies!

Keep em cumming.... your stories are well written and in the realm of believable..... Thanks and hope to see more.....(escapee from jersey city that can't seem to get registered here)

stop over and ask him how it went

There are still too many unfinished threads to this story.

Cindy wants 'her turn', her Mum is definitely 'interested' and then Kayla seems 'keen' on taking this further.

So please, write at least one more chapter for this story ?

Rapier

I want to read about him getting Debbie the MILF and turning her into his fuckslut, then banging Cindy and Kayle together. In a perfect world, he'd knock all three of them up.

Then again, I am kinda sick that way :P

Great Series!! I hope you write more chapters and more stories both!

More please i wanna know what happens next

That would be interesting.

Need to see what happens when Cindy goes to college. Will he bed her mom.

Like maybe a threesome between Matthews, and Cindy and Kayla. Matthews and Debbie' husband, and Debbie. Or, for a really raunchy new chapter, between Matthews, and Debbie and Cindy !

Last series you kept reminding us how thick and hard you are...OK ego, I guess.

But then you REPEATEDLY filled an 18 year old with your seed.

I was hoping that your story would lead to the dis satisfied MOTHER but NO, you found ANOTHER 18 year old to shoot your seed into.

I realize that this is fiction but apparently so is your sense of responsibility.

Sweet

If I was to be lucky enough to be presented with that situation the next day's paper would be about teenage girls helping older neighbor having a heart attack.

Delightful fantasy! Worth the six year wait. Let's see; Chris goes over to help clean up in the morning and finds the two teens eating each other's pussies. Or maybe Cindy lets Kayla watch her fuck her lover, since they have to keep each other's secrets. Lots of possibilities.

Perhaps their nation’s history and current trajectory imbues British writers with a special talent for detailed fantasies of past glories. Nice work. I hope you are directing that same energy into passions that are sustainable both today, and in the years to come.

Its a great story and a wonderful series and I hope there's more. Maybe the two girls get pregnant and Cindy helps him fuck and impregnate her mum.

I have read hundreds of stories on this site, but this series kept me up stroking my cock for two nights.

Loved it.

Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

I really enjoy your writing. After reading the 3rd installment, I wonder how prevalent unprotected sex is these days. It is hot in your stories, but your guy is dropping some much seed, he'll be working forever to cover child support payments.

Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Please keep them coming.

Clean up at the house and Debbie coming back to Divorce Cheating Hubby. Needing Mr.Matthews Attention. Along with Cindy and Kayla.

I wonder if there are any houses for sale in that neighborhood???

I jilled as I read it, cumming until exhausted.

My kind of story!

More...please.

Continue your tale please.

Will Cindy find her way to Mr. Matthews bed before dawn to get her pussy satisfied? Or will mom return to find Cindy screaming at the top of her lungs as she cums on Mr. Matthews big juicy hot hard squirting cock. Will mom get some of Mr. Matthews cock when she thanks Mr. Matthews for taking care of her daughter? How many babies will Mr. Matthews find in the spring?

Why do people keep writing stories and never end them?? The writer could have made this a fantastic story with many more chapters, why stop here??

I agree with your commitments, almost as bad as the girl leaving before the climax. This is the nth time I have read this story and like Mr Matthews looking forward to the games end I live in hope that one day some of these writers reach their climax.

This needs one or two more chapter, where Mr. Matthews gets Cindy, Debbie, and Kayla all three pregnant, at least twice or even three times each. Especially Kayla, whom he tamed, and practically fucked until she passed out. She needs to keep returning to Mr. Matthews until she winds up pregnant, several times. Keep up the good writing.

Cindy gets Mr.Matthew to fuck her mother- Debbie, and catches them fucking so she can control her....leading to to interesting scenes.

and Cindy gets gets pregnant, marries Mr. Mathews and they keep Debbie and Kayla as her pet sluts

i like the suggestions provided,

Thanks for the read.

1, cindy pregnant with Mr Matthew's baby,

2, debbie wants Mr Matthew's as a secret lover and kayla desperately wants his cock.

3, cindy resides to hatch a plan to stay with him,

4, debbie finds out, not liking it, wants him as well only to find kayla turn up at his door with her bags and wants to move in as shes pregnant and her parents kicked her out.

5, onwards....... you get the idea were this is going....

I leave it up to you to carry on the storyline , good luck.

Was an enjoyable read just a shame there isn't any more.

More chapters are needed, and Mojo has some great ideas!

I loved the story and I hope there's more. I hope he gets to fuck Debbie and gets all three of them pregnant.

Why not have a foursome with mother, daughter and Kayla

An unexpected chapter, but wonderfully imaginative. Hope you can bring back another Chapter, so your Guy can get to do Debbie, the neighbor's wife, and also to redo Cindy & her girlfriend together. Thanx for the Read.

He needs to help Cindy with cleaning up the place. and Maybe doing both girls at once.

Is there a fourth chapter coming ? If so is it possible to get Cindy and Debbie in a threesome with Chris and have the girls doing each other ? Keep up the good work and perhaps get your stories illustrated.

loved the game, and the way he used it to get Kayla.....and she loved it, of course, the little slut!

This was well written! So well that I skipped over proofreading errors was Really into the plot!!! We just need more chapters to see what twists and turns of the plot as yet unrevealed ????‽ 😎

love this story and i agree he should do cindys mom but like make it to where she gets divorced to clear his conscience . then after he has fucked the mom tell her that he came over to a party to make sure every girl was ok sum dudw was being a jerk he took care of the kid got drunk with cindy and kayla and fucked them both w/o protection now both girls r having his babies she understand and they all move in his house where he enjoys 3 bunnies daily and nightly 3:)

Wish I was him

Need more... Lots and lots more. Fuck divorce. Get the mom alone then get the mom, cindy and her friend together

More. Let him take the mom. Married or not. Then the daughter and her friend for a threesome. Then all of them for one hell of an orgy

So lusty - what a cum festive interaction - nothing left for all!

plz wright more

Anal Sex with the teenagers is always fun! Turning young, teenie-boppers into Anal whores is even MORE fun.

Try it, I bet you'll like it!

I sure have

(Hi, brookie, in case you're reading this, dear girl, know that I'm referring to you, sweetheart!)

LOL!

xo, -BB

Write a few more chapters, seducing Mom, and, may be, threesome with Mom and daughter.

Kanpur30

I'm obsessed! Please write more!

You were right not to have Cindy and her mother together, teens are insanely jealous creatures and thats more rare than anything else written in Literotica.

Nice job with a twist.

I loved it. Mr. M got his. Everyone is happy except cute little Cindy... boo-hoo-hoo,

Thanks for sharing.

I hope you continue with the story. I have really enjoyed it.

This chapter has been my favorite so far. The game was a great twist and I am eager to see what comes next for Cindy and Mr. Matthews. Maybe a threesome with Cindy and Kayla?

so why didn't Cindy get Pregnant because she clearly wasn't on Birthcontrol would have added drama to the stories

Good series. I enjoyed it, except! In just this last story alone, I would suggest that you do a word count on the word "pert". Subtract 1 from the total and that's how many times TOO many you used pert. Actually, in my opinion, as it is applied to "tits", the adjective "pert" is so over used as to have become all but invisible. Use of it at all, except in dialogue, is questionable at best. Pert has become such a cliche that you are apparently not even thinking about it. You used it to describe a breast that made its first appearance in a bra--a device designed to impart pertness to otherwise nonpert breasts. How would one know whether or not a breast was pert or not until it was ranging free! (The worst breast adjective? Ample! Not just driven into the ground, it never had proper meaning in the first place.) In general, pay more attention to your adjectives. E.g., Google--"pert synonym". It's not called creative writing for nothing. Sometimes, you use adjectives where none are needed. They leach strength from your meaning. Having once described something, e.g., with an adjective, no need to keep doing it and certainly not with the same adjective. It's called trusting your reader. Most of the time, it's stronger, more erotic for tits just to be tits.

Loved the whole series from start to finish. Fantasies are made from imagining scenes like these.

hope you continue this & cindy isnt upset with chris, just don't want it to end with him doing her friend.

Would love to read a story having Cindy out of town and have Mr. Mathews screw the mom. Sounds like she needs it!

I loved this story. One of my fantasies has been to be an instructor for young women at least 18 years old and are still virgins. Young pussy is like velvet inside and the last part of this fantasy is that their parents want them impregnated by me. Ejaculating fully into to them allows me, in the real world, to get a good stroke on. Ok, but it’s a fantasy and never would happen!!!

enjoyed the story would have liked to see what happened after Mom came home.

I enjoy your writing and love the story line. Would love to read more about these characters.

I realise it's been 3 years, but is there likely to be a new chapter? Please?

Anymore stories?

I loved this tory with the delectable teens Cindy and Kayla - it would be nice if mum Debby was to join in the fun in a future chapter!

I can't wait to read more!

More chapters. I love this series. Maybe in the next chapters Cindy and Kayla become pregnant. I would really love to read this in future chapters if there will be any. Good luck and keep writing.

...and what a great Game this was! Excellent Story, but I still miss the missing segment where Mr. Mathews, while continuing to fuck Cindy and Kayla (together with several more of their gorgeous 18-year-old girlfriends) finally gets to copiously fill Debbie, Cindy's Mom. with all the cock she can take. Thanx for the Great Read!

Great continuation but there need to be at least a couple more chapters. One with Mr. Mathews and Debbie, then another with a threesome. Please don't let the story stop now.

This part deviated to much. Not impressive

This is my favourite chapter so far.

I hope you’ll do another chapter or two though. I want to see Debbie get drilled and a Cindy Kayla 3 way would be nice.

You could use a thesaurus though. Your descriptions are a bit repetitive.

Well Cindy wasn't particularly well comforted in that chapter, Kayla appears to have enjoyed the lions share of the attention. I hope that you intend to progress this story with further chapters, trying to patch things up with Cindy, also furthering the action with Cindy's mother.

The whole series todate has been an enjoyable read.