This story just gets better and better, can't get enough, the story is great, the sex is hot, what else is there to say other than IM HOOKED!! And wouldn't have it any other way!! Can't wait for the next installment =) You are really raising the bar for the other writers here, at least to me anyway!
I almost fell out of my chair when I saw you posted again! I was so happy, beside myself. As for the chapter itself, it was excellent! More drama, huh? Poor Jake, to find out that his friend and the woman he loves has been together. I actually feel sorry for him...this time...lol. But hey, it's payback and time for him to feel bad for a change. Well done! Please post more soon!
You are absolutely amazing!!! That was intense and sweet. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Amazing. Keep up the good work.
to say you are a genius is an understatement. i can't wait for the next chapter to come out. i have to say this is one of the best stories i have ever read on this website. great work eve
I am so glad you're back with this story. I've missed it. Now it's going to be interesting to see how Jake handles knowing that Narissa and Tim screwed. Can't wait to see what he does.
Another great amazing chapter to this incredible story but please don?t make your fans wait too long for the next chapter!
Eve, I can't even begin to tell you how exciting this story is. Sometimes I wish it was a novel so I can just read and read and read until I am finished and then start all over again. Today I am even going to do something evern better. I am not going to write this comment as anonymous but put my name. I have sent other comments all good of course. I love this story so very very much and I can't wait until the next entry. I have been anxiously waiting for it to continue. I only realized today that you had posted another entry because I did not want to be disappointed if there was not one there. Eve I must say keep up the good work and I agree with another reader you are raising the stakes for the other writers with this amazingly exciting story. I love reading about interracial relationship with the woman being African-American and the man being white and this story is so wonderful. Again keep up the good work and I hope I don't have to wait too much longer for the next entry.
DAMNIT! IS SHE IN OR OUT PICK ONE! I absolutly love this story but goddamnit its frustrating!
Why do I feel sorry for Jake?
I feel so bad for Jake, Joe shoulda kept his mouth shut, but at the same moment, I honestly & truly think that this is all utterly hilarious
That is what Jake gets for keeping secrets....she told him.....kmsl...
He should have said something immediately after renewing the relationship. I still feel rather badly for him.
She's mad that he didn't tell her about owning her bldg & givin her a job but she has no problem w/him kidnappin, raping and ecterera.
He s should have told her before then
This is my second time reading it and I still don't like jake at all I don't find any redeeming qualities in him after all he did to her.but I read on anyway
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