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by Syndra Lynn07/21/04

Great look

at a subject close to our hearts. Nice job.

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by Maria239407/21/04

love it!!

I resist the urge to purge every single day, can barely stomach the news or paper anymore. You have an awesome, unforced rhyme going on inside this poem which gives it vivacious life of its own, very good!! :)

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by Tathagata07/21/04

That pretty

much sums it up.


"our words survive us
show we once existed
saw and felt
gorged ourselves on
lifes wonders
our blunders"

I love that


Nice job.

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by BlueskyBeauty07/21/04

maybe..

i'll reconsider writing!
now there's a maddening thought!!
this was almost readible in 1 breath..very nice!

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