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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/22/04

Still

Excellent!!!

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by Anonymous07/22/04

slave sis

"still" pulled a lump into my throat and brought a tear to my eye...i loved it...hugging you close, kata sis

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by lover bunny07/25/04

amazing

that was beautiful honey.

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Wonderful poem

hon,

this poem is absolutely beautiful :)

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by Anonymous07/28/04

so touching

You did an amazing job of capturing the emotions of those moments. I felt like I could see inside your heart. Thank you for sharing so beautifully and honestly.

-cryptic

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by duckiesmut07/29/04

goodness

...and now i'm crying. Just beautiful.

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by Maria239404/13/05

this is lovely

i know just how you feel. heres a motto for you, sweetie.

~~Dum spiro spero~~.

It's on the state seal of SC and it means, "While I breathe, I hope".

best wishes!! ~~ maria

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