All Comments on 'Diana's Dark Discovery'

I'm interested for more

Have your curiosity get her seduced. She resists his approaches but he gradually breaks down her desire to remain faithful.

Interesting story and characters. Please continue to develop the story

1. 5 pages is not what I consider to be a long story.

2. I didn't keep track of the elapsed time between Diana's initial discovery of the SD card and the end of this chapter but weeks and months were mentioned and that seems like a long time. If she needs this much time to get involved she may be too old by the time she makes the decision.

3. Have her approach Felicity to get started and she can see if she likes pussy as much as black cock.

Well, I've tested copying and pasting one full page into Word. I've done this several times, and they usually come out to 10 Word pages using an 11-point font. So five "literotica" pages translates to roughly 50 printed pages. Under most criteria, that's a long story.

I really enjoyed the build up. Please continue this story it could be one of the hottest IR stories on the site.

I enjoyed the tension throughout your descriptive story. Please take us along with your juicy imagination to the next stages of Diana's temptations.

This story really has potential! There is great tension, all kinds of possible amazing plot twists, don't let this one die!

and that she thought it was disgusting but yet, no sooner does she see these pictures than she begins to salivate wanting to give some black guy a hummer.

That is so fucking cliche, it's retarded. What's next? This formerly chaste, prudish 40 yr old wife is going to have multiple affairs and then we'll find out that all along, hubby was a closet cuckold?

Don't. Do. It.

Its just an opener. give it a 4

Please keep this going!

There has to be more to this story!!!!!!!!!!

The feedback to this story has been great! I wasnt sure if people would like it, I thought they might think it was too long, slow, or tame. Trust me, I have big plans - but I do want to take my time with this one and do it right.

It may be a few weeks for the next chapter. I think I've figured out where I want the story to go, I just need to get it down on paper the right away. I want this story to have at least a semblance of realism, and that takes some work.

Like I said at the end of the story, keep the comments coming! Give me your ideas. I genuinely listen, and some of the good ones might get into the story.

And a real cliffhanger ending. It can go in so many directions from here. Love it!

Love the great introduction to the story. Reminds me a bit of the old Mascarasnake stories that I loved so much. I do hope you continue with Diana's introduction to BBC and Mark's eventual cuckolding.

This was a great story. I think you should continue to develop it

I loved the story so far and was happy to hear you are going forward with more chapters. I think everyone who's read it this far, knows that Diane's going to eventually get blacked.. we just need to know how she will eventually get seduced. Looking forward to the next chapter and please let me know when it gets posted..

Realistic, original, well written and off the fucking hook hot. Please continue

Great story, well written, please continue with more about Diana's Discovery.

Thank you

well written and very hot story. more please soon .

Please continue with this I love the detail

please continue!

I enjoyed the story but it needs to go farther to its conclusion.

Really loved the slow build up, it wasnt too long, it was perfect! Please describe Diana's physical features more elaborately- her hair,her body shape,her breasts, her hips, her facial features etc... And please don't make her give in easily.You set her up as a very conservative loyal prudish wife, so make her seduced steps by steps.And thanks for the great story.Please take your time for the second one, no need to hurry.

this really needs to become a series. plz make it happen

All I can say is "more please"

This is a very good beginning of a potentially great interracial cuckold series.

I hope this story about these two wives continues. I would like to learn Diana's journey to the dark side (Mark too). I also want to know how far and how adventurous Felicity and Dave's swinging lifestyles is or has been. Gosh, I can't wait to read Diana's first black cock, her first BBC creampie, Mark's first sloppy seconds or cleanup, or when these two wives start sharing BBC, threesomes, orgy and many good swingers and cuckold delights

I'm with suggardaddyjr. I can't wait for a sequel to read where Diana finally takes a huge BBC from a young black stud and he empties his large load of black seed deep into her womb. I am particularly interested in stories of older women (50 - 60) take on young studs with huge cocks. Older women are more sexual than young women.

More.

Thank You.

I hope you come out with part 2 real soon. Keep up the good work

Please write more....the wifey got extremely wet reading it!!!!!

Excellent story. You cannot leave us hanging. Let’s have part 2. Thanks!

Felicity will find evidence Diana snooped on her computer and make Diana do her bidding. First she will take Diana to a black owned restaurant for lady's out dinner where coincidentally her black girlfriends will be present. Introductions made and Diana will agree to go to their house where invited guests will be present and plenty of black men with wives and girlfriends present. Liquor floes freely along with conversation about her two daughters in college as pictures of them are passed around, amazing Diana as she hears compliments about their sexuality. Plus praise of her own sexuality as one of the black women starts French kissing her to start the orgy. Diana becomes an appetizer passed around people as she gets fucked plus gets criticism from black women on her performance and spanked to do better for her daughters in college. Coincidentally two black couples have sons in same college her daughters go to and one couple has a daughter there, too. Diana is reluctant to provide phone numbers, facebook and email addresses of her daughters until spanked and fucked to complete submission before giving up the information. She is forced to confess they are racist and takes the spankings for them. The daughters ate targeted for black conversion and seduction. They quickly agree to date the black sons under pain and direction from their black mistress at college. Diana takes her punishments from Felicity and her black mistress will spank her for shortcomings shown by her daughters at college.

Awesome story. As a married couple that has just discovered hotwifing and the hotness of interracial (wifes lover is black) we found it a wonderful read. The slow seduction and the erotic play in dianas mind is wonderful. Keep it coming.

Yes plz! Diana should go black and it should be everything she fantasizes about and more and she's hooked after the first time.

continue this story.

finish this story. It was published here on the 24-4-17. I have been checking for further chapters...but, NOTHING !!! You have written that you want to get it right.

Do so. So many stories on this site are NEVER finished.

Don't you be one of them.

this story of Diana's Dark Discovery and would really appreciate further chapters.

Your characters are well described and realistic.

Will she....or won't she...only you know and I would LOVE to know !!!

Please continue.

Lovely story, i feel that i know those involved personally and think that you should further develop this to involve Diana at least in the same type of adventure. Good luck and thanks for this.

Oh please we must journey down the road of Diana's Black awakening. Does she slip off into the steam room at the gym with the black man that returned her phone? Does Does Felicity and Dave invite them to their secret society of cuckold couples at a luxury resort? Does Felicity secretly know Diana is peeping and sends her lover when Diana is dog sitting? Does Dave tell Mark that Diana needs a black lover?

Please continue

For those of lucky ones who actually have experienced this as a married couple, the seduction, the build up, etc. this story is sexy as hell. Please write more.

Perfect end. Don't continue please.

Please do proceed. You have an amazing way with words.

The story is unfinished, like a foot without a shoe. An ending is required to tie this all together.

MORE!!!Zm

Really enjoyed this, please continue this story, can't wait to see where you take it.

This story was obviously under rated. There was so much more that could have been covered, such as Diana either confiding to her husband about Felicity having sex with black men and that Her husband takes photos and video of the event. And Diana telling her husband about her desire to fuck black men like her best friend. Or Diana simply cheats on her husband with a black man. And of course Dian telling Felicity that she knows about her secret. And Felicity helping Diana and her husband get started into this very satisfying lifestyle

Well, I have to say I was a bit relieved to see this Was NOT about My Diana especially after the title abpout "Diana's Dark Secret. My Wifey's Mothers neighbors are young Black Men that Love older women and she has had more than her share of Hard Black Cocks now after the last month she was there for a month. She is so extremely sexual now and more orgasmic than she ever was. She hasn't really been stretched out because she is even tighter than ever before her Trip to the Darkside. Her daughter had to go next door to find her and she was also invited inside for some hospitality. Wifey was impaled from every angle and 4 brothers were waiting their turn as the three boys that were "brothers" finished cumming in her mouth and pussy. Diana's panties were being fucked too with a Big Hole in the crotch. I got to keep them as "Trophy Panties" from her first time she went for BBC. Videos are out there and hard to remove from public view but are still a Rush for us to watch when we find them again. Especially when her daughter finds her and starts yelling and trying to separate the impromptu gangbang. She still gangbangs with them when she comes back to town. They really wanted my stepdaughters titts to get filmed as they were bouncing all about when her Mom was busy taking hard black cocks. Try 54 MM. Fitted bras only on that kid. Wifey is only a 44D. She say baby is a throwback ; ) . Di has been sucking black cocks since she was 14 I found out after her fun Cali. adventure. The good thing is she showed me how she gets their cocks so big and hard. She brought me a fitting for our vacuum cleaner that has me 8 1/2 inches and harder than ever in my life. When she sucks her pussy with it she can cum over 50 times in a row for hours on end and she squirts like a can of Cream Whip ! I have never tasted such sweet lather. Di's Dark Secret No More!!!!!

Very hot.. sexy..erotic story... but it ended very strangely.. also.. five pages way too long.. too much misc. filler..could have easily been done in three pages...let me know when the next chapter is out

Wifey Diana, is back and more obsessed than ever about Big Black Cocks she wants to take me to get my cock tattooed a dark brown and black mixed to make it look larger. She already sucks my cock with the vacuum cleaner and it is thicker and darker and longer than ever before. 8 1/2" and 6 1/2" around and I said hell no. They gave her a Gangbang party when she came back 28 black guys came all over her. She loves it in her hair and on her tits and her face. Her trophy panties are so thick and crusty with cum that she will never ever wash them again. What a total slut she is for black cocks now. She wants to find some here at home now too then she won't need to wait for Cali. to get fucked extra deep.

Well since Diane is a detective, maybe she should look into Mark's computer history. He seems to be spending a lot of time on his own on the computer in his office. Is it all work related?

This is a wonderful start.....

Judging from the date, it's unfinished

Starting good but I hope she gets caught. She primed and will be easy for a black bull to ruin. Her friend can help him break her in so she lays back and drips as she spreads her legs for his black friends. Her friend can taunt her telling her she’s going to make a good whore for the blacks to Stretch out. How she’s gonna love watching her become addicted to being ridden by dominant black men and hearing her admit she loves being that way.

Excellent story!

If you're still out there, please finish the story.

Would begging help?

Thank you jiggajank for this entertaining, easy to read erotic story, I could almost smell Diana’s arousal as she delved deeper into her friends secret life

I would love to read a continuation of this terrific story

Excellent read, Thanks . Look forward to more of Diana's journey.

We need to hear more of this adventure!

Nice story. Suspense, slow build up and a great plot. Hope there is a part 2

How do all these woman keep from getting a s t d or do they get a s t d some of them