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by WickedEve07/23/04

I love just a few words

that have something to say. The first two lines are the best. I think the ending could be a little stronger. I'd replace either purr or pleasure, maybe both. "Cursive paintings" is a great phrase.

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by BlueskyBeauty07/23/04

it didn't take many words..

to make this wonderful.

very lovely read!

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