All Comments on 'Magical Mischief Whore Pt. 04'

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prop69 almost 7 years ago

Ok..not as good as chapter 3

What happened

prop69 almost 7 years ago

Second comment today - Sorry for Beth but at least she got the last work

You made Scott a jerk and that is fine. Scott is an idiot that he had a beautiful piece of as at home and he blew the opportunity. Glad Beth blew him off. Hope Maeve will give Beth a good cock to fuck

hardheadd1 almost 7 years ago

What the fuck???? Worst ending ever!!!! 2 stars

Orthopode almost 7 years ago

Wish I hadn't bothered

I carried on reading this series in the hope that two rather unpleasant people might change for the better. I was wrong.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Needed a Different Ending

After reading this submission, really wished Scott had been Maeve when Beth woke up. They go at it again when Scott finds himself fucking Beth. Maeve then turns to face him but turns into Beth (except she keeps Scott's cock) and has Scott go behind her and fuck her as she has Beth's pussy. So the siblings are fucking with Maeve in the middle. Maeve then leaves with both siblings naked and satisfied.

gemini0257 over 6 years ago

WTF??????

Just a terrible terrible ending!

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