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by WickedEve07/24/04

poem

I'm looking at this as a poem and not haiku. I'm assuming it's haiku because of the 5-7-5 but with all the "what is haiku?" controversy that comes and goes on the poetry board, I no longer even try to identify a poem as haiku. So, this is a poem--and I like it.

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by flyguy6907/26/04

Well woven...

whatever it is! The thread theme stitches the thing tightly together.

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