All Comments on 'GianCarlo Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

The least you could do after a 3 year break is give us a brief intro as to what happened in the previous chapters. Will it be another 3 years?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I agree with the other Anon... where does this even pick up??? This chapter was okay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice

I read the other 8 chapters; compared to those your writing has drastically improved...After catching up though I hope it doesnt take as long for updates granted TONS of writers on here abandon their art never to return. Good job overall...

bigdnc13bigdnc13almost 7 years ago
Welcome Back!!

Thanks for continuing this fine story. After this length of time, you could've just bailed but didn't. It's appreciated by many of us readers.

overtherainbowovertherainbowalmost 7 years ago

Am I the only one disappointed in who was at the door? A cliff hanger like that 3 years ago then we get Stephan bringing him condoms, bit of a let down. I'm thanking you for not just abandoning it like many others do with theirs, but please don't wait too long for the next chapter.

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutiealmost 7 years ago

Thank you so much for coming back to give us an update and I hope that this won't be the last. Was it really Giancarlo's parents at the door? Them being mates doesn't make Delia immortal as well? Wouldn't making her a vampire save her life? I am so happy to see this update!!!

DollylolaDollylolaover 6 years ago
Ahhhh!

I love love your story!! Hurry up! Come back and finish!! Don't leave us hanging!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Please update its a really good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please update

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
LOVE this story

Been on this site for too long...your story, this story, is one of the few I still daydream about. It’s been 4 months and I can’t let go. I’ve even made up a semi ending in my head to alleviate SOME of the suffering.

If you can, please, please, please finish this story! You have so much to give!

Thank you :)

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