All Comments on 'My First Fuck'

There is no character development, no sense of setting, and little attention paid to the plot. I like erotica, but there has to be a well developed story in order for it to come off right. Please get an editor and rework the storyline.

I disagree with the previous poster. Not every story has to be a novel for it to be great. Sometimes a succinct story like this one is enough to get the engines revving. Good job!

I also agreed with the guy before! It was short but it was enough to get me worked up. I enjoyed it very much keep it up.

This story brings up a dream I have quite often of my friend feeling my ass and eventually I spend the night at his home! After showers, while watching TV,he puts his arm around me and places my hand in his lap. When he kisses me, I open my mouth for his tongue and grab the biggest, longest hard dick I have ever seen and can't wait to be fucked for the first time. I'm still waiting to meet someone to fill me with dick and fuck me like my dreams .

I want feei a cock in my ass too