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perkspective
I don't use the rating thermometers.
My perkspective on your poem is posted in the poetry forum on the new poems thread.
Aye!
The eyes (I's) have it. I like this poem, I see it as a wistful plea for happiness.
I don't use the thermometer.
Perfect Poem
I am confused about the use of the word "waxing" other than that, reading this is truly humbling, haunting me with the realization that I could never match the economy, the imagery.
I feel inadequate even commenting.
soft....
...and beautiful. Your words can move like tiny, summer breezes and are quite stunning at times. You and I have never discussed line breakage, and spacing. I would like to do that. You do some startling things that usually seem to work, things I would never even consider. Wonderful poem, JC.
Love the optimism
A waxing year that lasts a lifetime! A joyful poem, despite the frustration.
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