A kind of guy who live fast and die young crushing his motor into a tree. Or, considering the way life works out mysteriously, a tree would fall upon the pocket Rocket!
I like the way you write. Fresh and clean, this read like a wet dream and it flowed right into the 'movie in my head' type of visualization. Keep it up!
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A cave man on motor bike!
A kind of guy who live fast and die young crushing his motor into a tree.
Or, considering the way life works out mysteriously, a tree would fall upon the pocket Rocket!
Sweet!
I like the way you write. Fresh and clean, this read like a wet dream and it flowed right into the 'movie in my head' type of visualization.
Keep it up!
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