All Comments on 'First Public Story: Daddy's Lesson'

If she was going to be punished for dressing like a whore, I was hoping he would whore her out.

You slip between first and third person. I'd recommend getting a Beta reader.

How did he throat fuck her when she cleans him since he put a red ball gag in when she did not know how many times he whipped her while throat fucking her the first time? Although this is a fantasy there is very little chance that anyone would still be conscious after so many lashes with the cane and followed by a whipping of 40 I think I read. This is not how most Daddy's treat their little. They do punish, but this is a severe punishment which most Daddy's don't do as they are protectors as well as Daddy Doms.