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by Lauren Hynde

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annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
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I will be reviewing this in the new poems review

just say no to thermometers

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 20 years ago
i like this.....

..very much. great imagery. my favorite part:

arid seeds of fire

naked

in praise of the blood

*sheesh...forgot to rate it...a definite 5.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
beautiful

you always write splendidly, but this was a bit different, in my opinion. Stunning work, L.

BelegonBelegonover 19 years ago
I also love "arid seeds of fire"

I truly enjoyed how the poem flows and the image of the fall to earth is provoked.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
I like...

...this very much. A beautiful concept done simply, without a wasted word.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Wow

So spare I needed 5 readings before I gave it a 5!

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
"Naked

in the praise of blood" is an awesome line! Wish I had written it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Calling a spade a spade

One of the scariest poems I have read. Plus no one seems to be alerted: “in praise of the blood/ and the mud / and the simplest things on earth” ??? Sure sounds like a Fascist poetry if I have ever seen one (even if unintended, or unknowingly by name to the author). ************************* I am just the messenger. Look up the motives themes and symbols of Fascism in art.

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