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by Anonymous

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by BlueskyBeauty07/25/04

i was not..

expecting that end..lol

had to read every mutha fuckin line to get it! lol

nice job!

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by DeepAsleep07/25/04

Hah!

Excellent, excellent, excellent.

this is like....

getting your skull
sucked out of
your face through
your ear
this is like that
skin that peels
upward near your
cuticles

I know EXACTLY what you meant by this, and the continuation aobut the little bits getting caught on shit. *champion nail-biter* Great ending, with little clues that made me smack my forehead, at the end.

~D.A.

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