All Comments on 'Raven and Clarke of the 100'

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MTL17MTL17almost 7 years ago
Great work

Forget Niylah, Raven should make Clarke seduce Octavia into some threesome fun. Also, Raven could make herself a cock to fuck Clarke with. Ideally of the strap on variety. Or just more of this, because it was great.

I think you went a bit overboard with the recap at the beginning. I get you were setting the scene, which is good, but it felt too much like an information dump as opposed to something characters would naturally think about. But that's a minor nitpick, as I really enjoyed the rest, especially Clarke rimming Raven's amazing ass. I just wish there was more of it.

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