All Comments on 'Quicksand'

This is smart, Ellen, as so many of your poems are.

The reader is left with a question: Was this desirable or not? For those so inclined, yes; for those not, no. That's a wide range. Any poem that encompasses that is a good poem IMO.

It does, however, present a parodox: Lit asks you to ID a submission as either erotic or non-erotic when, in fact it can be either according to the reader's need.

all the way to the bottom. TK U MLJ LV NV