by tungtied2u
i loved the way this flowed off my tongue, right to the very last drip! ~winks~
I love alliteration and this offers so much more. The frozen mind and thaw of imagination, or coming back to life after a cold spell. I can relate. Nice!
not too much, just enough to make it a great read.
*No longer using the thermometer.
Excellent example of employment of alliteration; pulls the reader in just to continue to hear the sounds you've generated here.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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