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the full shine

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by Anonymous

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by Liar07/27/04

dead sexy attitude

in six smart, slick lines

very nice

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by tarablackwood2207/27/04

your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by Tathagata07/27/04

How come

I never get invitations to these parties??

i'll be seeing this all day
thank you

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by flyguy6907/27/04

Ouch!

I wonder how those boots taste, served with swift-kick sauce!

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by tungtied2u07/27/04

Yeow!

That whip stings!

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by dcpoet4407/29/04

like this.....

.....a ton, and it has a great ending. nice...nice...nice....

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